Think about the book you are reading. Would you change anything about this book? What would you change? If you would change nothing,why?
23 comments:
Twilight4
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HI!!! I would add more detail to the book and put more Girls in the book in the book their are 6 girls 7 boys boy will not read the book i am reading so i would put more girls in the book i am reading is in twilight called eclipse!
Dear Room 202, I don't want to change anything in HARRY POTTER AND THE PRISONER OF AZKABAN because the book is just so good that I don't want to ruin it by changing it!!!
I just finished the book Geronimo Stilton Attack of the Bandit Cats. I would not make any changes. I like the book the way it is. It actually made sense and I would not make sense.
Dear Mrs. Scrittorale, I am reading Little House on the Prarie. I'd like to change a lot of things. It is very boring. It tells about them moving a lot. But then it got exciting when the Indians came. I would add more exciting details like that. Your student, Teresa
I am reading Charlie And The Chocolate Factory. I wouldn't change anything because I think the book is very intresting. And i think it's a happy ending.
I am reading the book I,Freddy. I don't think anything needs to be changed because it is so funny. For example, Freddy rides on the tomcat's back and he flies off!!!
dear Mrs .sritt I would change nothing in the Hank zipzer book Who Order This Baby . I wouldn't change anything because it is so good . And i like a good book
I am reading Mrs. Kormal is not normal. I would change the fact that Mrs Kormal speaks only a few words in her secret language. i wish there was more of that in the book because I like to find out what she is saying in her secret language
Ben says; I don't think I would change anything in the Percy Jackson and The Titans Curse book. I don't think anything could be added because it all ready has a lot of good detail.
Dear Mrs.Scrittorale, I am reading a book called Punished. I would not change one little thing about this book. I would not change any thing about this book because I love this book very much!I like this book so much because it has a lot of energy and excitement.
Hi the book im reading is called percy jackson and the olympians the sea of monsters i woudnt change it because the author put in a lot of good detail.
23 comments:
HI!!! I would add more detail to the book and put more
Girls in the book in the book their are 6 girls 7 boys boy will not read the book i am reading so i would put more girls in the book i am reading is in twilight called eclipse!
Gracie c
i wouldint change anything to my book because it is so cool the way it is and i like that.
Dear Mrs.Scrittorale, I would-nt change anything because I think that whatever the auther writes doesnt need to be changed because its well orginized
Yours Truly,
Alexis#3
Dear Room 202,
I don't want to change anything in HARRY POTTER AND THE PRISONER OF AZKABAN because the book is just so good that I don't want to ruin it by changing it!!!
-Rhea
I just finished the book Geronimo Stilton Attack of the Bandit Cats. I would not make any changes. I like the book the way it is. It actually made sense and I would not make sense.
Owen Reddington
Dear Mrs. Scrittorale,
I am reading Little House on the Prarie. I'd like to change a lot of things. It is very boring. It tells about them moving a lot. But then it got exciting when the Indians came. I would add more exciting details like that.
Your student,
Teresa
Dear Mrs. Scrittorale,
I am reading Emily Windsnap And The Monster From The Deep.
I wouldn't like to change anything because it is already a great book!
- Sarah
I would not change anything in my book. My book is magic tree house I would not because its full of action and adventure
I am reading Charlie And The Chocolate Factory.
I wouldn't change anything because I think the book is very intresting. And i think it's a happy ending.
Yours Truly
Liam123!!
I wouldn't beacause they put in all the deatails they need.
I wouldn't beacause they put in to much deatails.
I am reading the book I,Freddy. I don't think anything needs to be changed because it is so funny. For example, Freddy rides on the tomcat's back and he flies off!!!
SA22
I am reading Chopper and I would not change anything because the book is good the way it is.
My book was THE BREAKTHROUGH.
i'm reading the colisuem con!i would like to change it because it is hard to understand who is talking in this comic book.
dear Mrs .sritt
I would change nothing in the Hank zipzer book Who Order This Baby . I wouldn't change anything because it is so good . And i like a good book
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Alex b
Dear Mrs.Scrittorale
I am reading Ordinary Boy. I don't think you should add anything because it's adventurous. I also like it because they're is superheros in it
From,
Jack Deletto
I am reading Runaway Dolls. I would not change anithing about the book because of all the details you feel like you are there.
Jillian Roche
I am reading the Phantom Tollboth. So far I would'nt change anything because It's interesting and funny.
Taylor
GRACE J
I am reading Mrs. Kormal is not normal. I would change the fact that Mrs Kormal speaks only a few words in her secret language. i wish there was more of that in the book because I like to find out what she is saying in her secret language
Ben says;
I don't think I would change anything in the Percy Jackson and The Titans Curse book. I don't think anything could be added because it all ready has a lot of good detail.
Dear Mrs.Scrittorale,
I am reading a book called Punished. I would not change one little thing about this book. I would not change any thing about this book because I love this book very much!I like this book so much because it has a lot of energy and excitement.
Your Student,
Eliza
Hi the book im reading is called percy jackson and the olympians the sea of monsters i woudnt change it because the author put in a lot of good detail.
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