Hi! It's Prisha I am reading the book Little Sister Big Sister. It is a very good book. I think the author should change the part where the big sister has to clean up her room before she goes out to play with her friends.Then her little sister came in her room. The big sister had a plan to make her little sister clean up her sisters room. She said that they could play the game 'Queen' and that she be queen and her little sister would be the maid. Her sister said yes she would play only if she also got to be the queen to. The big sister said yes. The big sister was very mean she maid her sister clean up her entire room! VERY MEAN!!!!!!That's what I want to change about the story.
Hello!I'm reading Our strange new land.I would change that some men in the village don't work.They should know that if they don't work they will freeze in winter.That's what I would change.See you later!
I am reading a Sherlock Holmes book collection .I am on 'Scandal in Bohemia'. (Bohemia is a place in the Czech Republic, where my dad was born!) Well I haven't got very far in this book but if I could change anything I would like a little more action.
I am reading the book The Heroes of Olynpus the Lost Hero. I think the author should change the part when Festus the bronze dragon brakes by crashing into the ground. Festus is one of my favorite characters in the book so I want Festush still working. I would like to change it to making Festus crash on something big and soft so Festus is not really damaged but he hits the ground so he is really damaged.
The book I am reading is The Giraffe and the Pelly and Me. The part that I would change in the book is when the robber shoots Pelly and makes a hole in his beak. That's the part that I would change.
HI it's Gabriella Iam READING Ten apples on top I would'n want to cange any thing because it is a great book why would want to change any thing? I has actin and detail
I am reading America Making of a Nation. I think they should add more history facts in the book. They didn't give a lot of facts about the wars the United States was in.
I would not change anything because I like the book just the way it is. The book I’m reading is Harry Potter and the Sorcerers Stone. I like it this way because it is so interesting and I wouldn’t want to change any interesting parts.
Hello,it is Jameson I am reading Diary of a Wimpy kid DOG DAYS. The thing that I would change is when Greg's friend's dad makes them pay $83 that came from them buying smoothies. But I think that Rowley's dad is being to hard on them. And that Greg's family gets a dog, but it did not like them at all. Then they end up giving it to their grandmother, but here comes the twist it loved their grandmother. Which I really do not get. The comic in the newspaper called Precious Poochie and its fans are having a riot. And the last thing I would change is when Greg starts watching the Soap Operas just because his mom had taken him to the beauty salon. That is what I would change from the story. Bye,bye -Jameson
Hi it's Jianna.I am reading Vacation Under the Volcano (Magic Tree House.I would like to change the characters because I think there's a little bit too much of the same characters which is becoming really boring don't you think?
yo! i`m reading The Red Pyramid,the first book in the kane cronicles series.I wouldn`t change a thing because I think the book is already really good. ariana
It is me ben im reading Diary of a Wimpy Kid The Last Straw. In it Greeg was just wereing his underware a lot thank goodnes it is a cartoon well sardave. Also in the book there was a really big food fight.
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I would chang the part in magic tree house when she dosen't taken the help from a friend.
Amelie
Hi! It's Prisha I am reading the book Little Sister Big Sister. It is a very good book. I think the author should change the part where the big sister has to clean up her room before she goes out to play with her friends.Then her little sister came in her room. The big sister had a plan to make her little sister clean up her sisters room. She said that they could play the game 'Queen' and that she be queen and her little sister would be the maid. Her sister said yes she would play only if she also got to be the queen to. The big sister said yes. The big sister was very mean she maid her sister clean up her entire room! VERY MEAN!!!!!!That's what I want to change about the story.
Hello!I'm reading Our strange new land.I would change that some men in the village don't work.They should know that if they don't work they will freeze in winter.That's what I would change.See you later!
Ginger
I am reading a Sherlock Holmes book collection .I am on 'Scandal in Bohemia'. (Bohemia is a place in the Czech Republic, where my dad was born!) Well I haven't got very far in this book but if I could change anything I would like a little more action.
Jason
I am reading the book The Heroes of Olynpus the Lost Hero. I think the author should change the part when Festus the bronze
dragon brakes by crashing into the ground. Festus is one of my favorite characters in the book so I want Festush still working. I would like to change it to making Festus crash on something big and soft so Festus is not really damaged but he hits the ground so he is really damaged.
Gabriel
I would want to change that there are only like 4 pictures in the whole book and they say there are photographs and I like alot of photographs.
-Sean
The book I am reading is The Giraffe and the Pelly and Me. The part that I would change in the book is when the robber shoots Pelly and makes a hole in his beak. That's the part that I would change.
Andres
HI it's Gabriella Iam READING Ten apples on top I would'n want to cange any thing because it is a great book why would want to change any thing? I has actin and detail
HAPPY READING!!!!
I am reading America Making of a Nation. I think they should add more history facts in the book. They didn't give a lot of facts about the wars the United States was in.
Liam
I would not change anything because I like the book just the way it is. The book I’m reading is Harry Potter and the Sorcerers Stone. I like it this way because it is so interesting and I wouldn’t want to change any interesting parts.
Hailey
Hello,it is Jameson I am reading Diary of a Wimpy kid DOG DAYS. The thing that I would change is when Greg's friend's dad makes them pay $83 that came from them buying smoothies. But I think that Rowley's dad is being to hard on them. And that Greg's family gets a dog, but it did not like them at all. Then they end up giving it to their grandmother, but here comes the twist it loved their grandmother. Which I really do not get. The comic in the newspaper called Precious Poochie and its fans are having a riot. And the last thing I would change is when Greg starts watching the Soap Operas just because his mom had taken him to the beauty salon. That is what I would change from the story. Bye,bye -Jameson
Hi it's Jianna.I am reading Vacation Under the Volcano (Magic Tree House.I would like to change the characters because I think there's a little bit too much of the same characters which is becoming really boring don't you think?
yo!
i`m reading The Red Pyramid,the first book in the kane cronicles series.I wouldn`t change a thing because I think the book is already really good.
ariana
It is me ben im reading Diary of a Wimpy Kid The Last Straw. In it Greeg was just wereing his underware a lot thank goodnes it is a cartoon well sardave. Also in the book there was a really big food fight.
Benjamin Andew Prill
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